Winner is blind_poet Winning Poem

Your Host: Bronze Dragon The original Form Over Substance Challenge has a new format and a new face! Here's the deal - write a poem using the form presented, and your fellow Starliters will vote for the one they like best! As this is week 3 of the new FOS, you should all have the hang of it by now - so the form is: The Trine - The Trine is a French form of poetry. It is a nine-line poem that is composed of three rhyming couplets and a triplet. There is no fixed meter or syllable count. The rhyme scheme is: aa bb cc abc For an example of this form, click here. Simply write a poem using the form above. The winner of FOS is decided by the all Starliters. The Host - Bronze Dragon - presents a new form each week. Challenge ends on April 28th or upon reaching 15 poems entered. FOS is a voting challenge - please return at the end of the challenge to vote for the poem using the form that you liked best. Any entries not following the form given may be removed by the Host prior to voting. Thanks, and Have Fun! Message: First on the scene, lol, does that count for anything? Well, here is my Trine. I hope you enjoy it! Pam :) Poem: Jungles Poet: Adele Kaye Message: Poem: curtain call Poet: dawa Message: Thank you Michael. I hope this is right. Thank you friends for your comments. Bless you. Poem: RIVER OF LIFE Poet: poetalthomas Message: the trine... the scribbler is learning Bronze Dragon., so be kind, lol... aloha! Poem: journeys end... Poet: crossedrifles Message: Poem: Surrender Poet: alwaysmywords Message: So far so good, my friends! Rey, you did not have comment area, but wanted to let you know I enjoyed your entry!! Poet: bronzedragon Message: Poem: Eternal Spring Poet: blue_poet Message: I had to try, Sir Dragon so please forgive my silliness. I was **Trine a New Form ** Poem: Trine a New Form Poet: blind_poet Message: Michael, Here is my poem for your challenge. Welcome all visitors. Hugs Johanna Poem: Gods Echos Poet: johanna266 Message: Ready set Laugh Poem: Night Terror Poet: rainspirit Message: well, I tried, right? lol Poem: Poetic Misery Poet: rosieswords Message: Here is my feeble attempt Michael LOL. Poem: Step Lightly (Trine) Poet: tinyteddy Message: IN research I found the trine to be connected to things celestial in nature ,sO I made this small attempt to keep the dragon smiling. Poem: A Heavenly Example Poet: jollynoblefrog Message: Wow I am impressed this is filling up fast! Here is my take! Poem: Indelible Embrace Poet: hhazlett26 Message: Poem: All The Bluster Poet: c_steven_blue Message: Last, but hopefully not least..... Poem: Sophia, Sophia Poet: morning_song Advertisment Remember every Starlite member can open their own challenges. These challenges can be opened to all of Starlite or to only your friends. You Decide!