A Mystery in Kyrielle form
Out of the shadowed dark she came
a maiden lost without a name.
Out of the faery mists came she.
She still remains a mystery.
The years have past, the years have gone;
but yet no memory lives on.
Who is this lass, who could she be?
She still remains a mystery.
She asked about a mortal lad.
For once upon a time she had
a love so rich and pure and free.
She still remains a mystery.
She looked at me with so much love;
but sadly, love is not enough.
Of her I have no memory.
She still remains a mystery.
With tears she faded from my view.
'Farewell, my friend, adieu to you,
I wish that you remembered me.'
She still remains a mystery.
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my first attempt at Kyrielle form....comments are appreciated
thank you
also written for Poison's BTM challenge theme Fantasy
By blind poet
© 2008 blind poet
(All rights reserved) The poem above was written for the Form Over Substance Challenge
- we're reviewing forms with refrains!
The poem above is one of the following types of poems:
Kyrielle
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/82728.html?1073098568
Pantoum
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/54847.html?1160092171
Quatern
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/81490.html?1068209918
Retourne
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/83038.html?1073542176
Rondeau
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/86537.html?1082954759
Rondel
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/85156.html?1076908661
Rondelet
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/82656.html?1072853357
Terzanelle
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/84308.html?1073867130
Triolet
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/81343.html?1068092396
Villanelle
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/82136.html?1068568136
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