Multi Facets of Heartbreak
The pain so deep within my heart
covers and makes my body numb
I roll the memories of what I've done,
but don't know at all where to start
Before me, tear stained images
I have covered with shattered salt
and know the tragedy is my fault
How my life has been such a mess
We used to dance to the heartbeat
One, we were, and inseparable
This pain is not repairable
as I know now you are a cheat
Do you hear me whisper to you?
Dear Lord, I need your help right now
Many reasons you have, this, allowed
With guidance, you will pull me through
Caring, intelligent, honest,
funny, temperamental, zealous,
outspoken, witty, sarcastic, plus
patient-Ten Words to show me best
His moodiness kept him from me
Secretly, though, I always knew
It's hard to distinguish wrong from truth
when sifting through ashes, I'll be
Jesus, there has now come a day
that I ask for your loving care
to fix my heart and the massive tear
Take my hand and lead me away
I no longer hear the thunder
To Jesus I will always cling
and His joyous song will always sing
for Heaven's a place of wonder
Challenge Submission
Hostess: tinyteddy (Bonnie)
'Multi Write Challenge'
Included challenges:
Hostess: Creativity5363 (Dorrie)
Moderator: tinyteddy (Bonnie)
'Broken Love-
The pain so deep within my heart'
Hostess: badmac (Brenda)
Moderator: rainspirit (Renee)
'Tear Stained Images'
Hostess: hhazlett26 (Heather)
Moderator: kajuncutie (Myrna)
'Best Love Poem-
Dance to the heartbeat'
Hostess: Betty (Betty)
Moderator: rainspirit (Renee)
'FreeVerse-
Do you hear me whisper to you'
Hostess: rainspirit (Renee)
'Ten Word-
All About You'
Hostess: tinyteddy (Bonnie)
Moderator: rainspirit (Renee)
'Sifting through ashes'
Hostess: badmac (Brenda)
Moderator: rainspirit (Renee)
'Take My Hand and Lead Me Away'
Host: Bramptonmc (Michael)
'Place of Wonder'
By foreverinlove
© 2008 foreverinlove
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